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Post by Warrior for Truth on Sept 27, 2005 21:02:19 GMT -5
This is a place to post everything that inspires you!
I know we have some fantastic writers in the youth and i wanna see this stuff! BUT i also wanna see what inspires you. As long as you give the writer the credit and not claim it as your own stuff then i wanna see it. If you claim something is yours and i find out that its someone elses it will be deleted and you may be temporarally suspended SO! JUST DON'T PLAGURISE!
ok LET THE POSTS FLY! i wanna see poems and stories!
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Post by JayPhreakThr3e9 on Sept 27, 2005 21:18:49 GMT -5
many of yall know i write as a way to express myself, esspecailly my anger and pain i store inside my deranged mind. most of my lines of inspiration comes from songs i hear on the radio, mostly from artists with deep lyrics that many would find....disturbing. my favorite band to get a few ideas from is DEMON HUNTER!!! their lyrics are exactly the expressive lines i look for.
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Post by notetoself on Sept 28, 2005 14:05:19 GMT -5
I'm so bored with all these guys trying to feed me the same old lines.
"Your eyes are like the ocean. Your smile lights up the room..." blablabla.
Oh, please. Tell me something I haven't heard before. I've been promised the world. I've been promised to be treated like a princess. I've heard it all.
So stop promising!
Start praying!
I know the guy God has for me will be made of so much more than dumb one-liners and a sweet face.
He'll have a heart after god and he'll be a prayer warrior.
So unless you live up to that standard, lay off the whole flirting thing.
<3 Kimmie Wolf
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Post by Warrior for Truth on Sept 28, 2005 21:11:58 GMT -5
i know your serious but sorry i gotta say it lol
"Kimmie i've prayed the the world will colapse if you should say no to me!"
sorry it makes me laff.
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Post by JayPhreakThr3e9 on Sept 28, 2005 21:14:58 GMT -5
kimmie, all i can say is plez 4give the guys who act all macho. a real man isnt goin 2 use some cheep one-liner, but be honest about how he feels toward a girl. 4give some guys, for makin us other guys look bad.
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Post by Brecia on Sept 29, 2005 7:36:08 GMT -5
Kimmie, not all guys are bad...
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Post by Brecia on Sept 29, 2005 7:38:49 GMT -5
When I wrote this, I was thinking in the context of how people treat God.
Starlight, star bright First star I see tonight I wish I may I wish I might Have the Wish I wish tonight
Starlight, star bright What happened to my wish last night? Wish as I may, Wish with all my might The wish I wished didn't turn out right
Starlight, star bright I come to again tonight Pleading and begging for this to be right But nothing comes from you rays of light
Starlight, star bright I’m done with you after tonight All you did was shine on Bright And disappoint me so Goodnight.
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Post by Ash on Sept 29, 2005 17:23:20 GMT -5
That's a very good poem, Brecia. <3 I love it.
I know both Sarah and Jason both have plenty to post.. ;D
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Post by notetoself on Sept 29, 2005 20:15:59 GMT -5
Kimmie, not all guys are bad... Woah,woah,woah...ya'll are getting me all wrong. That wasn't a big "Guys suck, none of them are worthy of me" rant, it was saying that I'm waiting on the perfect guy for me. I'm not going to just go for the first guy that pays me the least bit attention. My Love is saved for the guy God has for me. Sorry if you thought I meant that I was all high and mighty or whatever, that couldn't be further from the truth. I know some guys don't suck, I have the best big brothers in the world!! Good gonga, folks! Get your facts sraight! <3 Kimmie
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Post by notetoself on Sept 29, 2005 20:16:48 GMT -5
Oh, and Brecia, I love your poem. <3 Kimmie
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Post by frankislivinginmyfoot on Sept 29, 2005 21:06:29 GMT -5
OMG. well, first of all, before i go off... Nice site. but if i'm not mistkaen... this topic for this blog thing was "poetry writeings and other inspirations", and if i'm also not mistaken by what sarah said... "This is a place to post everything that inspires you!I know we have some fantastic writers in the youth and i wanna see this stuff! BUT i also wanna see what inspires you. As long as you give the writer the credit and not claim it as your own stuff then i wanna see it. If you claim something is yours and i find out that its someone elses it will be deleted and you may be temporarally suspended SO! JUST DON'T PLAGURISE!
ok LET THE POSTS FLY! i wanna see poems and stories!" so, why is it that when Kimmie wrote that poem, and shared it with you, you all jumped down her throat, and started Making Fun of her?? Hmm?? if you actually read that poem, you would've got it... sorry.. i love all you guys, but you were wrong on that point, and you owe her an apology.
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Post by Warrior for Truth on Sept 29, 2005 22:42:33 GMT -5
dude calm down, i thought of something funny lord just calm down. i didn't mean to offend her but i think if she IS offened then she can speak for her self. but thats just my opinion.
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Post by Warrior for Truth on Sept 29, 2005 23:04:06 GMT -5
[glow=black,2,300] I know i've put this on my xanga but the thing is it still sticks with me.
At this late hour thoughts of this and that flow into my brain,
Infecting it hardcore makin me go insane.
This and that and them some more,
Its enough to make me hit the floor.
I spin mad rhymes even at night,
I just let go and i take flight.
My minds ever flowin,
Never stoppin,
Always goin
to this world that world
your world my world.
No place is safe from my thoughts from my mind
now i just wish i had the time
to move on in my life
to give up all this strife
get back what i give
to find the peace just to live
i feel the pain of the world
i see flags unfurled
not really sad
not even mad
just felt like flowin
cuz my mind just kept goin
harsh thoughts are sent to trip
well here's a little tip
i know i got somethin special to give
thats the only reason why i live.
if that ain't true
then i don't know what to do.
dunno why this rhyme hit me so hard
I wanna be known as the battlin bard.
i give God my all but i still feel pain
i'm just a player in this massive game.
i'm no where near perfect
i'm the Dark Angel,
I'm an SOJF so what now son
You don't like you better start to run
i won't quit i won't stop
no matter the price i know it all by heart.
My rights are gone
but yours remain
now tell me why do you complain
This is just one rhyme to tell ya what i know
how i feel thats why i flow.
I am Dark Angel so ya see
I got pain but He's in me.
I get over it i move on
heck maybe this will be my next song.
Thus end this rhyme kiddies hope ya learn
God will be with ya through the twists and turns.
Yeah it started sad but then it moved to glad
cuz i'm Dark Angel and i'm xtreme like mad.
Night kiddies[/glow]
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Post by frankislivinginmyfoot on Sept 30, 2005 8:27:26 GMT -5
not if her computer's broken... lol. sorry if i was jumping down ya'lls throats, but yeah. that seriously wasn't cool at all. i love all you guys, hardcore.
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Post by Ash on Sept 30, 2005 11:51:13 GMT -5
No, it wasn't. If you have a problem with another member, please keep it to private messages and off the board. I don't have a single writing ability. My poems begin with, "Roses are red, violets are blue.." pathetic, I know. Back to the people who can write..............
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